1st chapter of my 1st story is up.

I am trying my hand at writing it is my first ever. I would greatly appreciate it if you would check it out & tell me what you think.
I take constructive criticism well, so please be honest. Please read and review. It is a Bella/Jasper fic


http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5380981/1/Innocent_and_Isolated_to_Wild_and_Free

Writing my first story

I am going to try my hand at writing and enter The Indies First-Time Writer Challenge. I hope I can do it.
Now I have to come up with a good plot & storyline something original. I have a few ideas, one involves an ice rink.